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Tuesday 12 August 2014

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I reckon my comment is good and understandable because I really did not know that much about Commonwealth Games and you can tell I was surprised reading your story. Your story really hooked me and yes it was like every word was something new to me.  

2 comments:

  1. Hey Siaosi I really liked how you said the way you felt and how you learned a lot more from reading it. Next time I think you should try a question at the end of you comment. Did you write a Commonwealth Games article as well?

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